My Sleeping Beauty Poem by GJG Elton

My Sleeping Beauty

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In anguish I stare through flowing tears,
at photos of you from bygone years,
as here I sit, alone, and cry,
dreading that soon, I might say goodbye.

Day after day, I sit and wait,
for nature and medicine to seal your fate.
The swelling sickness which inflames your head,
fills my heart with fear and dread.

...

Are you aware, what fills your mind;
unspoken words you may leave behind,
undone things we never may do,
or life's decisions, that you still rue?



Will those eyes that sparkle and shine
lose their luster, as you decline?
Will that smile that lights a room,
fade away as you drift towards doom?
Will that mind, so witty and clever,
fail to revive, thus lost forever?

DAMN! those Gods, will they cheat you again;
as often they've done through trial then pain?
Or will those Gods, grant my wish,
that, to others, will seem selfish.

I'd walk away, from familial duty,
to kiss the lips of my Sleeping Beauty.
Once love's kiss, caresses thy lips,
I'll steal you back, from death's cruel grip.

Those stars in your eyes cannot yet go home,
for decades to come, your spirit must roam.
I offer my warmth, my force, my years,
so that you may explore those new frontiers.

There's waters to paddle, on bright sunny days,
plus schoolin' to learn, and new songs to play,
your new home to start and ballrooms to grace,
there're Pines yet to wander, and Devils to chase.

...

I know that you're ailing, tired and weary,
but please shun that land of the elves and the fairies.
There's still much to do, and on you must carry;
wake my dear love, so that we may yet marry.


Once those Gods decide and you're destiny bound,
will your family and friends then gather around,
to welcome you back to your old life refound,
or mourn your sad loss as their hopes are all downed?

While miles away, I will struggle to quell
the pain deep inside, that's worse than all hell,
as I wait for those Gods, to return my sweet belle,
or ring the last gong of your early death knell?

Copyright © 2014 -

Sunday, December 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is about a beautiful young woman, with the name of Anita Maria Lopez. Over the past few years, I have written 100's of poems about and for Anita. Many were published here on PoemHunter, the others, well..., they still await their unveiling.

I have known this young woman for more than four decades and she epitomizes the true meaning of the perfect woman. Having just turned 60, I know she would argue endlessly that I am delusional, yet I contend she still retains all the charm, wit, grace and beauty of her younger days. A verse from another poem about Anita that I wrote a couple of years ago...

Much time, has passed, since that photo was taken.
She's lovelier today, her beauty, unshaken.
Tomorrow the same, and for many to come,
And though she complains, I remain mum,
‘Cause decades ago, was when I first succumbed.

Anita still has the zest for life of a woman in her 50's, the body of a woman in her 40's, the passion and lust of a woman in her 30's and the spirit for adventure and wild-eyed innocence of a woman that just turned 20; as I said, the perfect woman, and a damn good kisser too. During my travels over the years, I have met many women, and not a single woman, not one..., is a match for the mystique and singularity of this woman; a loving, caring, intelligent, creative, witty, charming, sensual, beautiful, lustful woman. That's my Anita.

I wrote this poem about her because she suddenly became unconscious and was rushed to the hospital, where she has been, coma like, for days. The little news I receive about her condition leaves me physically ill and in pain, soul crushing pain. I am more frightened now than at any moment during my entire life; and I have lived through some terrifying moments.

I hope what is now only a possibility does not become reality; she is far too young to pass on. She still has so much to experience, to share, to LIVE! The universe and life in general still owes her so much, and I want…, no, need her here to collect on that debt.

She is the type of woman that the measure of her life is not about what she had done, but the possibility of what she could have achieved had she been given half a chance.

She is, and forever will be, my Morning Sunshine..., my Princess..., my Pineyrican...

I needed to vent, so thank you for listening to the ramblings of a crazy old man like myself.

Update #1:

A number of readers of this poem sent me emails asking about Anita's condition. I am thrilled to report that she is awake. Although the future is not set, she improves day by day.

Update #2:
Anita continues to improve and day by day I can 'feel' her improvements through her texting. The future looks promising.

Update #3:
It's been more than a month since my last update and for those that have asked about Anita's condition, I can say that, while she has a way to go before complete and total recovery, the doctors are releasing her next week.

Update #4
It's been just over a month since Anita was released from the hospital and she is recovering comfortably at home. She's back to her usual home duties and daily exercise routine, and just recently returned to Facebook. All in all, I think she's on her way to a complete recovery. While complete recovery will not happen overnight, I do see it in her future.

I want to thank all those strangers out there that expressed an interest and offered their well wishes. I know that I appreciate the concerns, and Anita appreciates them even more. To her, the outpouring of support from complete strangers is overwhelming.
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GJG Elton

GJG Elton

Philadelphia, PA
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