My Shining Star Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

My Shining Star

Rating: 5.0


Sky is full of stars
Some stars, look small
Some stars, look big
Some are shining bright
Among them is one star

Its like my child days rhyme
“Twinkle twinkle little star
How I wonder what you are
Up above the world so high
Like a diamond in the sky”

Yes, it looks like diamond
And its shine, gives light
During all my lives night
It makes me feel like knight
On one day it’s out of sight

But eyes bagged its light
And heart backed its sight
In sky during all my nights
And filled life with lights
After months it’s back to sight

But it lost all its shine
Now it looks like pine
And fallen down at nine
But in heart of mine
It’s still a shining star

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

good word play there to support your shining star...impressive write

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i was about to be the first to comment and say the same. i love the meaning, enjoy the rhymes

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 May 2009

Like diamonds, stars are forever and so is your shining star. Beautiful write, Kranthi. Best Wishes Naseer

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

Nostalgic aroma is here within this beautiful poem. The twinkle stars of the sky have their effect on us still. 10++

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Catrina Heart 28 May 2009

Our shinning star is always in our heart. Wonderful poem woven with fine end rhymes.........10+++

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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

this is a wonderful, poem sir..I enjoyed it to the fullest extent..very musical, nice beautiful orchestra... it is A+++ from me..

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Surya . 31 May 2009

a wonderfull poem. you are indeed a shining star.posted 10 surya

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 May 2009

A poem shining like a star...................A Good rhymes as always.............

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Louis Rams 28 May 2009

it takes up a big part, once it shines in your heart. KEEP THAT STAR SHINING

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Eyan Desir 28 May 2009

Nice work Sweet rhymes

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