My Sentimental Life Poem by eyara Rambac

My Sentimental Life

Rating: 4.7


They eye me as a strong person
i defy that idea because of emotion
emotion that is full of sacred fears
beyond my soul
that could instantly change my strength,
my thoughts and all.


I denied the fact that I'm a girl who easily cries
while thinking of profound sentiments of my life
hiding my tears while bearing a sweet smile,
contemplating every sad thoughts of a guilty mind


I tried to fight the doubts within,
which weakened my courage to scream out loud
but I cant forsake the truth beyond.
and continue to live in the wilderness of a sob.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 05 October 2008

a very strong words of revelation of a person..strong determination..well narrated and write..very good..A 10 4 this.. Ency Bearis

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Kesav Easwaran 30 September 2008

despite we want to control emotions we might not come out successful with it at times...life is always a sentimental sob, Edlor...good write, insightful, for your age...10

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 September 2008

I'm not quite sure I caught all of this, but if I did; this was one of the more fascinating revelations of a personal nature I have ever read. I won't even try to interpret it because I have many more questions than answers. But as a piece of writing it was above average and worth the read. GW62

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