My Second Senyru Poem by David Taylor

My Second Senyru

Rating: 5.0


Tired of writing poems
I wearily wrote my second
stab at Haiku

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ms. Poetess 10 October 2007

Not quite. Your stanzas are: 7 - 8 - 4. Should be 5 -7-5. Keep trying, good message though...

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