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Shahzia Batool

Rookie - 302 Points (Pakistan)

My Scattered Thoughts viii


My shadow always stays with me
I never walk alone,
I have a bit of life in me
who says that i am stone?
while musing over lost time
or writing rhymes,
I do not feel the time flying
My mind is always jam-packed
with loud and stormy scattered thoughts;
I always brought
the real Me in true colors i mostly wear,
writing- and but no way out
God knows better every fact
who dictates me verse I wonder
I am bound to write at once
or keep it safe in virgin mind
Goodness Gracious!
how can I be really able
to bear the burden of my thoughts!
So do you never worry for me
- - - - - - - - - - - - -
I never walk alone!

Submitted: Thursday, June 27, 2013
Edited: Friday, June 28, 2013

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  • Rookie Passionate Reader (7/5/2013 2:28:00 PM)

    You play with words and make a pleasant harmony! ! ! The start just holds my whole attention and I enjoyed till the end.

    My shadow always stays with me
    I never walk alone,

    Truly an intriguing write! ! ! Well done :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 836 Points Vera Sidhwa (7/2/2013 12:00:00 PM)

    Your scattered thought are God imbued, and philosophical in nature. And God will let you know when your
    thoughts will be express, and when kept in virgin mind. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,525 Points Valerie Dohren (7/1/2013 9:45:00 AM)

    Our shadow is always with us, either the shadow within or the manifested shadow. Great write Shahzia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 501 Points Tribhawan Kaul (7/1/2013 2:23:00 AM)

    Anotther penning of beautiful thoughts regarding self introspection and yes, no one is alone in this world. His/her dreams/ thoughts/shadows never leave one alone.. Lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 135 Points Danny Draper (6/30/2013 5:36:00 AM)

    Scattered thoughts captured here as are many poems the captured elements of scatterd thoughts, nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,402 Points Dinesh Nair (6/30/2013 12:30:00 AM)

    Your scattered thoughts bear witness to your proximity to all and the luxury of solitude proclaimed is an impossibility for you with 100 poems being bloomed out of your groves of philosophy, erudition and imagination. Wonderful write, Shahzia, (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,376 Points Wahab Abdul (6/29/2013 8:56:00 AM)

    and congratulation for completing 100 poems, this must me a special feeling for a poet and also congratulation for being on top on popular list of living poets on this site.... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,376 Points Wahab Abdul (6/29/2013 8:53:00 AM)

    nice thought and talking with alter ego is wonderful.. my shadow is also walking with me.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,023 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/29/2013 7:33:00 AM)

    Nice to keep developing scattered thoughts, which reflect the mind better than concentrated thoughts. Faithful shadow keeps company. Nice start and end. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Yasmeen Khan (6/29/2013 3:59:00 AM)

    You true feeling are described here. A sensitive person always experience this even when a poem is not being composed, thoughts move along scattered and at times composed into poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 107 Points David Wood (6/28/2013 1:15:00 PM)

    I always try and channel my thoughts before setting down to write and keep my thoughts loose. But poetry is that bitter sweet pill that takes over our thoughts. Often I have the first line then as I write I let the poem take over. A lovely write Shahzia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/28/2013 12:49:00 PM)

    Congrats Ma'am u have completed ur 100 poems...keep on sharing such wonders among us..
    Congratulation (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,911 Points Valsa George (6/28/2013 3:17:00 AM)

    while musing over lost time
    or writing rhymes,
    I do not feel the time flying
    That's exactly what we all feel! No wonder, we spend a lot of our time in poemhunter, musing our thoughts away! As the other poems of this series, a powerful write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,107 Points Ramesh Rai (6/27/2013 8:16:00 PM)

    no one is alone. always carrying shadow n thoughts.this poem radiate the inner feelings certainly a poet who always prefers solitary (Report) Reply

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