My Scars Poem by Monique Ornelas

My Scars

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My scars are like entries in my diary,
you could tell how mad I was by looking at the deepened scars,
you could tell how many times i've hurt,
you could feel my pain, you could touch my past,
many end up confused ''why''
& the bad part is I don't know why this method,
I guess it was because I wanted to punish myself for everything bad happening,
I guess it was because somethimes this world felt like a dream, like I needed to know I was alive,
I guess it could also be because I was tired of not being in control of the emotional pain I felt,
the anxiety tearing me up inside,
the sadness destroying my life,
I wanted to be in control of something,
I guess I could go on and on why,
but the answer is really simple actually,
''PAIN''

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 22 January 2009

A nice poem with a depiction of your pain...........You have used simple but meaningful words......The simli of scars indeed reflect the agony and pain but one has to look otherway around and try to minimise the ugliness of scars by opening new gates of happiness.........I enjoyed it though..........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Elena Winters 17 January 2009

we all go through pain but understand you can't control everything that goes on...........sometimes you can.......but its up to you to heal yourself very interesting overall this was an amazing poem 10

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I have many scars too so i feel you're pain this is a good poem KRISTA

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Monique Ornelas

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Bakersfield, California
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