My Salt Lagoon! Poem by Poetheart Morgan

My Salt Lagoon!

Rating: 5.0


shhhhh
silent! ! !
do not leave the little box

or zipper or unzipped anything

no one needs knows that you are in love
again
sincerely….
almost in your done

shhhhhh! ! ! !

if they want know how you love
all that strange way
with flags, jeeps, wild drinks

oh and the dances! ! !
alone, the cuts, the slips
Oh! My
keep it on the box, well closed

the time pass by you but you still remain the same
dancing alone
bits and bites coming from the ligths

silence and long crash
sometime a howling
your eyes out of orbit

and the obscene things
from obscene book of love
remarkable!

perpetuating your one single lover
with salt indecent walls memory
~in your lonely lagoon~
sinked in your little box bit by bit
silent and determined

drawned

in a unimaginable silence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.j. Wynn 29 July 2013

Thanks for sharing this is on fire.

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Indranil Bhaduri 23 July 2013

Fantastic piece.. very different style. Thank you for gifting the same.

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Sekharan Pookkat 23 July 2013

good work. I like the lines[perpetuating your one single lover with salt indecent walls memory ~in your lonely lagoon~

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Ramesh Rai 23 July 2013

Im drawned in a unimaginable silence such is wae in your write

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