My Ruined Heart Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

My Ruined Heart

Rating: 5.0


She let my heart fall into ruin
Unaware of the heavenly hoard

The love's scent spreads forever
All angels fall in love
Even the Lord

(2008/7/1)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M M 01 July 2008

This is a very lovely poem, Nightingale! You made a treasure of your ruins! Well done and full of hope

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Tsira Goge 01 July 2008

The most attractive a minor.... A nightingale 10... Tsira

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Hela Jug 01 July 2008

beautiful poem, pure 10 nightingale

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Lynda Robson 01 July 2008

A lovely clear, pure poem, and the Lord fell in love with all mankind, thanks Nightingale, 10 Lynda xx

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Rachel Butler 03 November 2009

'All angels fall in love' Rachel Ann Butler

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Tsira Goge 21 November 2008

Song of a nightingale.... Beautifully also it is melodious... As always Tsira

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Seema Chowdhury 02 July 2008

very true. Love is a gift sent by God Almighty. it is infectious and deadly too.....

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how wonderfully shortly said...

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Thad Wilk 01 July 2008

A poignant write, straight from the heart - a pleasure to read! ! *10*! Best regards, Friend Thad

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