My Rose Poem by Eman Elbadawi

My Rose

Rating: 3.8


I met the right person
But the wrong time
More than once.
I met the wrong person
The right time
More than once
So why
Would I
Give him my Rose
If he would eat it up!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Erica Francis 11 November 2005

Your finish is cute but a bit anticlimactic. 8 satisfactory? I hope.

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