My Rose Poem by Liza Sud

My Rose

Rating: 5.0

You have touched my rose by your words,
And its edges grew up so sharp,
it wants you inside – or it hurts,
And without you it may die.

But more hurts when she is unveiled,
Non-transparent white skirt.
Cause it is an eternal rose,
and it wants to entwine with God.

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Моя роза


Ты задел мою розу словами,
и края ее стали остры,
и ее очень больно ранит,
если нету тебя внутри.

но больнее ей - быть раскрытой,
непрозрачен белый подол,
Хочет с Господом вечным слиться,
и любить ее хочет - Бог!

Friday, November 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 08 November 2015

Superb poem, Nicely written, LOVED IT Liza.

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Unwritten Soul 07 November 2015

it is a lovely write Liza :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2015

Eternal rose likes to unite with God is the symbol of pure mind and purity. Interesting poem shared for nice reading...10

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