Easy breezy
downpour rain,
see you in a distant.
Over hilltops, treetops,
rooftops, cheektops,
and over the seas.
Make it sweet,
the rains first fall,
sunlit from heavens
like first dew fall.
Eden saw play,
crooning sadness
setaceousily as you come.
Wash away,
cumulus sorrows,
singing gladness.
Oh! ! insouciant raindrops,
art thou so pure?
moody and mild,
but sometimes wild,
you sometimes child.
Love thee, fear thee,
everywhere you go,
garnering secrets that
nobody knows.
05-10-08
ANJALI
It's a beautifully expressed poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing with me
Great Poem. It brings a soothing calmness to me!
lovely! I feel it's better if we listen to Chopin's Raindropp Prelude while we read this cute poem. keep writing!
Fantastic vocabulary.... wow! Best words in best order that make your poem always and always...
Raindrops that runs and rushes into a rich, refreshing river. Thanks for sharing my friend.
the freshness of the rain you brought in your lines... lovely...10
Its far better than mine, Anjali, because this is so light and crisp and there's a frisky air about it, a happy exuberance, an all pervading jubilation about being alive...
U kiss my cheeks As I look at the pregnant sky The glow on ur face Matched the shine of my eye Don't go away, lil raindrop For u I hv seen, mother earth cry.... Anjali...ur poems are eternal,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
good poem...drizzling sweet...'setaciously'- a typo there...needs edit...10