My Patience Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My Patience

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I controlled my passion but could not
Tears forcefully contained but rolled out
I have strong will but failed this time
Attachment is such relation you fail sometimes

I had beautiful times good moments
I used to wait for him and remain present
He will sure come and close in
To embrace me and win

That was all good for me to find a friend
He had vowed to stay till the life end
I fell for him and vowed to stay together
He took my hand and promised not to bother

Today he is leaving me behind
Lone figure to wait and find
His fond memories and nice time
I hold my tears and think sometimes

What will he look like when come back?
Will our sweet life be at jeopardy or at stake?
What will he do if earned a lot fortune?
Will he maintain same relation with fine tune?

I slipped in to thoughtless dream
We had so far worked as team
He was to stand all the time by my side
As our horizon was vast and very wide

I wished him long and happy journey
I thought" it may be wish of almighty"
He is on the board of ship to cruise
To fulfill all the dreams and promises

I stayed at shore and witness
His ship sailing towards sea surface
Never ending and never disappearing
But sending me shock waves and fearing

I brush aside such thoughts
I wish all the good in life without being caught
It is part of the life and one must venture out for good
The philosophy of life must be clearly understood

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I controlled my passion but could not Tears forcefully contained but rolled out I have strong will but failed this time Attachment is such relation you fail sometimes

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Please write your poem in this pic. So everyone can enjoy ur beautiful words dear. And thanks so much. 48 minutes ago

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Dave Walker 21 June 2012

A fantastic poem really like it, a fantastic write.

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Victoria Marie Pecsenye tears forcefully contained, but rolled out great line 12 minutes ago · Like

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 October 2022

The philosophical expression is worthy of profuse admirations dear poet.

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Annette Van Der Put I love this... I have lived this! Many times. Not only with my husband, but also with my children. I know that if you love somebody... You have to set it free! It will come back in time! True love always does. Love is no possession, its free and unconditional. It is trust. 10 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Bathsheba Dailey awesome and very heartfelt 10 hours ago · Like

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Susana Hazelden We have several poems recently about beautiful emotions at missing someone near and dear who is gone. I like this theme. You have captured it in a unique way. Well done, Sir! about a minute ago · Like

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Persian Khushi days months & years may pass uncle dearest. not a minute or an hour when thoughts of lv musing laughter tears close to my heart 6 hours ago via mobile · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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