My Painting Poem by Hanh Nguyen

My Painting

Rating: 5.0


Today's dawn links tomorrows dawn
Falling leaves and Spring comes fast
The smell of dew in the earth
Then all will turn into rains

To blur the past, enough, or no?
Wipes away tears, she's standing under the rain
I'd lend her my shoulders
But perhaps an umbrella would be better

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gleb Zavlanov 03 August 2013

This is a neat poem. I liked its deep meaning. Thanks.

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Hanh Nguyen 07 July 2013

thks Dave, urs are great too! Hope u gonna make more poems

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Dave Walker 06 July 2013

Like it, a great poem.

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