My New Friend Poem by Rick Elpers

My New Friend

Rating: 5.0


When I look into your
amazing blue eyes
You swallow me into your soul

A soft electricity emits heartfelt
That's draws me close
As my arms resist caressing you

I pull back with the strength
Of horses that we can't
Wrap ourselves together

With your words of desire
That cause internally
A dialogue feeding my soul

So we work under the same
Duress creating objects
Of glory for all to see

I welcome you into my life
We will do fine
With or without the heart

Opening too soon
Too fast
Too late

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 24 October 2012

A wonderful optimistic poem about the beginning of a relationship, great write!

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Karen Sinclair 23 October 2012

Wonderful from start to finish.... i love..with the strength, Of horses... a powerful expression...tyvm karen

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