My Mother's Last Breathe Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

My Mother's Last Breathe

Rating: 4.9


Your time gradually flies
From the mud and dust beginning
You want to come HOME

But even we try to add memorable moments
We can’t hold your breathing and life
Because every event has finish line
Because every walk there is a Last Rest

Only we can do is to grasp
To seize every instance of our attachments
To remember the caress how you nurtured us.
To remember the pain and joy of our bonding and binding

All the bliss of honor and nimbus of happiness
You greatly and wholly share
Faucet of tears fell
River of sweat flowed
Just make us to survive,
To shine, and to reach the peak of our dreams

You make yourself as a blockade
Of all despises and scorns
Covering us with your humility and honesty
You showered us with your tender love, affection and endearment.

Thank you to all sacrifices
You have done to us
Thank you to good values, aspiration and hope
That you engraved to our being
Thank you for your noble dedication
That make us a molded and refined person.

But my mother whisper her simple request,
“To let her last breathe,
her last eyes open,
her last words,
To be with the GARDEN walking with GOD”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Areese Woodson 12 May 2014

Very touching. A loving reward for a loving mother

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Bharati Nayak 15 May 2015

Such a marvelous piece of poem.The adore and love you have for your mother for imparting right values in you is expressed beautifully in this poem.

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Ana Rose Trazo 05 August 2014

such a very nice poem. i can feel the emotion as i was reading the poem.

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Srabanti Guha 21 June 2014

A wonderful poem where you remembered your mother and paid tribute to her..... it's truly beautiful

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Katelin Taylor 05 June 2014

This is such a wonderful poem. So accurate to how I feel about my mom and how she has nurtured and loved me through the years and how broken I will be when she goes home to be with Jesus.

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Romeo Della Valle 28 May 2014

Speechless! Wow! What a heart touching and well crafted write you got here! A great tribute to your dear beloved mother! My mother also passed away a few years ago and I feel her absence every single day! Thank God they keep living through all of us! I admire your talent and deep feelings! I was honored to be invited to go to your country which I did last December and I am planning to go back next year for another poetry event! Thanks for sharing and keep it up! 10+++ Regards form New York City (I will read some more when time permits dear friend!

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