My Moment Poem by Nicholas Lind

My Moment

Rating: 5.0


Withered down sickled skin,
Layers paved my way,
Stricken down got back up,
Scars create my faith,

Fizzled dreams dropped my tears,
Eyes just stay alive,
Stepping over every stone,
Life becomes defined,

Seeing what I never saw,
Feeling where I am,
I love this path I follow,
Creating where I stand

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I feel at this point in my life this describes exactly my moment.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Laurent 21 November 2013

This is so great! Every line holds meaning and the rhythm is impeccable.

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Sandra Regan 24 October 2013

Very nice. Simple and well written. Please check out my poems if you get a chance. Thanks!

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Nicholas Lind

Nicholas Lind

Newburyport, Mass
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