My Mind....My Child Poem by Giri 2007

My Mind....My Child

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Sometimes laughing....
Without stopping
Causes some throbbing...
My mind is my child!

Threatens me like enemy....
Having lots of alibies
Making me feel sorry....
My mind is my child!

Reluctunt for exercise...
Abundunt shows of laziness
Fighting with routines....
My mind is my child!

Looking at guys and guls....
Awesome for gulps....
And else...and else...
My mind is my child!

Looking always for comforts...
Cajolling also a part...
Sleeps at the dark...
With the sounds of my heart...!
My mind is my child!
My mind is my child!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poornima Kanasen 10 February 2007

Hey Giri, Nicely written..(My mind..my child...seriously, it makes a lot sense.) Yeah, never doubt the ability of our mind...lol...Take care and write more... My best wishes to you and welcome aboard..... K.Poornima

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Asma Bahrainwala 02 November 2006

Enjoyed reading this poem.. welcome to PH.. Asma...

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Nalini Hebbar 30 August 2006

welcome to PH... nice poem about the mind...my favourite topic too.love...nalini

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Preeti - is here! 30 August 2006

I love the sentence that you've coined - 'my mind is my child' Love the simplicity of this poem. But is your mind always your child? or does it listen too much to what others have to say? I mean most minds do waver. It's nice to see another Indian on PH, welcome! Preets

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