My Mental Illness Poem by negar shahnouri

My Mental Illness



my friends told me tht i dont blv in optimism! !
because, , ,
when they say 'sea'..i'll tell 'em killer sharks
if they talk about 'romantic nights', i'll tell 'em its tottally dark!

they give me chocolate and i see it as a black thing! ! ! !
and when im in th airplain i can bet tht it will lose it's wing!

demon, dejection, death, divorce, , , , did u say the letter D?
so u better dont mention A, H, M or EEEEEEEEEEEE!

what? ur name is ahmed? Ok let me see
the most 'A'doreable and 'H'andsome 'M'an i've 'E'ver seen
dear dew delicious, do u need more words for introducing the letter 'D'!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
debbian 22 February 2018

Loving that poem

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Jihad T 17 January 2009

wel well well it could be a very good rap song i like it but i'd like you to write with no short in words like when you said tht i know it means that but it's a poem dear it's really good

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