My Magic Man Somewhere In Fantasy Land (Revised) Poem by Heather Burns

My Magic Man Somewhere In Fantasy Land (Revised)

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Father Time with his
magic wand
touched our lives
creating a magic
wonder land

as you approached me
I was overcome by your
black curly hair framing
your face

Eyes blue as a cloudless
sky
Skin liken to fine satin
lips as sweet as honey

Touch as soft as a kitten
heart of purest gold
body as strong as an oak
tree

Reaching for me we were
swept away
to a magical paradise
somewhere in seventh
heaven

as night fell I enjoyed
your cradle of love
you are my magic man
somewhere in fantasy land.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.j. Wynn 08 August 2013

I love it, very visual.

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Valsa George 08 August 2013

So you dwell in that fantasy land with your Magic man, blissfully away from all harsh realities of life! Enjoyed!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 August 2013

Land of fantasy almost looks real. Fine poem.

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Dave Walker 07 August 2013

A great poem, sounds like the perfect love to me.

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