My Loving Ernie, Poem by Aftab Alam

My Loving Ernie,

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A wretched boat on the chaotic ocean searched the shore
“Life is better than dream; save it first then, clean the gore, ”
Having glimpse of sand, steered boat with the greatest joy,
From the death trap to dream world; seen a wounded boy

He kissed the shore and then took, handful sand in his fist
And ran shouting; I won, I’m alive, life is the best holy feast
Those struggled for the life can define life in dreamy way,
With heavy lids, I hugged him with no words; I couldn't say

He whispered in my ear, ” Soon I will start my journey “
Go, be a dream, blessing be with you; my loving Ernie,

Thursday, March 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 28 October 2020

He whispered in my ear, ” Soon I will start my journey “ Go, be a dream, blessing be with you; my loving Ernie, - - - - - - - -lines that put readers in tears

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 March 2015

Soon i will start my journey. Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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