My Loving Daughter....... Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

My Loving Daughter.......

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A treasure and blessings for us from our God
to have you as a wonderful and sweet daughter
You bring us a special joy and charm
and fills happiness around our home
Your smile does brighten our days and set us free
Your hugs and kisses make our hearts melt
There is no life without you and you are everything to us
Years have gone so quickly and brought so much changes in you
But your every experiences have left us to remember you forever
We are proud to be your parents and its the best ever we have felt
Sometime you make naughtiness and we go crazy
but silently we enjoy when you tease us and others
You are the beautiful child we brought you on this world for reason
To love and teach you right from wrong and protect from sins
No matter what, God will keep us together forever
That will be the best of our family can be.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2009 Ravi Sathasivam

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Nwagwu 03 August 2009

love of parents a duty transformed into love so special, Ravi; love of child the happiness of Eden.

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Shashendra Amalshan 03 August 2009

This is a beautiful write sir.. Filled with emotions.. Your daughter must be so sweet isn't she? .... I wish her every happiness with all my heart... with lots of love and hugs to your cute darling daughter.. shan//

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Surya . 03 August 2009

a doting father, doting daughter.very nice poem. voted10 surya

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Seema Chowdhury 03 August 2009

excellent.... i have 2 daughters and i wrote several poems for them too. i know how it feels to be a parent of a lovely daughter. best wishes for her.

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A treasure and blessings for us from our God to have you as a wonderful and sweet daughter You bring us a special joy and charm....parents are lucky to hve daughters as they prove caring till the end... lovely presentation and worthy too.....10 read mine papa do u know? ? ? papa you too! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Kim Davis 05 August 2009

Ravi this is a nice touching poem. I love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Chitra - 04 August 2009

a heartfelt write..touching the pinnacle of love and affection, the bonding between a father and daughter.

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Lady Grace 04 August 2009

''Sometime you make naughtiness and we go crazy but silently we enjoy when you tease us and others You are the beautiful child we brought you on this world for reason To love and teach you right from wrong and protect from sins No matter what, God will keep us together forever That will be the best of our family.''..a very smart and honest presentation..naughtiness is a sign of a lovable child..i guess this child is like me...coz sometimes i am naughty tooo, , sssshhhhh....hehehhehehehe...of course this will go to my fav coz this is so nice..can't express my wrds for this coz i appreciate this much..i love this piece..thanks for the poem, ....parents, try to appreciate the good things done by your children..naughtiness is not all the times a bad sign, ..i will put myself as an example.i am naughty but i am not bad..naughtiness is similar to sweetness..this poem is so beautiful...promise..

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 August 2009

lovely write sir...brings my sweet daughters to mind

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