My Love Left Me Broken Poem by Melody Morningstar

My Love Left Me Broken



Standing on a wooden porch
Reaching with a child’s hand
Wishing with a lover’s heart

Tender as a new born lamb
Fragile as porcelain
Warm like loves embrace

My love you left me

Stranded on a deserted island
Lost in the woods
Crying like a babe

You left me

Dazed and confused
Shocked and amazed at

The fact you can know someone so well
Yet not at all

Now I am

Crying in my pillow
Raging like a storm
Hurting like a paper cut

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
poetic fury 31 May 2006

this poem isnt bad you should really try to expand on your material it will make you a more diverse writer

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Elya Thorn 31 March 2006

I liked this poem a lot! well done! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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