My Love For You Poem by Johnica Barrow

My Love For You

Rating: 4.0


My love for you is never ending like the love we make
My love for you is a passion that we both give in take
My love for you will last even after my time has past
My love for you is like your face its a beautiful thing
My love for you is more then just a felling
My love for you is rough like when we make love
My love for you is more then any other
My love for you makes me happy that you are my son's father
My love for will never be untold
My love for you everyone will know

My love for you is more then just love babe
My love is more then just love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence H 20 February 2012

a few spelling mistakes spotted, pls correct it to make more sense...? ? Sorry for my bad comments but your poem is excellent if the spelling are corrected in order to make sense of it. example, then should be than and give in take should be Give and Take...sound logical..

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Leo Lopes 04 June 2008

I liked reading this one, very passionate writing Keep it up

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Junior Pocoloco 09 February 2008

How wonderful to have the love you have. Have you ever read Twenty Love Poems And A song of Despair by Pablo Neruda or any of his love poems? I think you would be at home with his words. Junior

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You put a lot of love into this verse.

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