My Love Poem by Broken heart emo

My Love

Rating: 3.5


Your ignorance is killing me inside
All my emotions that i cant hide

Your the only thing thats always on my mind
Why is your heart so blind?

Why cant your see my love for you?
And my pain just grew

When will you see my pain?
I stand all alone in the rain

I cry for you a blood tear
I think my end is near

I would like to say good-bye
Beause the day goes by

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 01 July 2009

I like this personification of heart: ''Why is your heart so blind? '' eye catching....nice poem

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Sangs P 01 July 2009

I can feel that pain and longing...well infused in the poem! It could only be because you are truly in 'love' and going through that pain.

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Eyan Desir 04 July 2009

So soft and sweet goood write

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 July 2009

oh sweet love...............fine! 10+

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Ken E Hall 16 July 2014

Sad poem of heart that's breaking lost love in the rain...over the rainbow love will come...regards

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Mason Maestro 19 July 2011

Why is this so popular? Anyone could have written this!

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September I Harris Allen 09 February 2011

Oh, so short but you can feel all the hurt and pain. I really like this. Please have a look at my link. Thanks

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Poetry of optimism and yearning But ending with 'Painfully Yours’ 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mary Joy Lumanog 18 July 2009

Are you always heart broken? Me..I don't want to feel that anymore you know...but it seems like in love you need to suffer first to endure happiness to the one you love..that was me...maybe still..but i jut dont wantto think about it..there still life ahead of you you know..so keep it up!

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