My Love Poem by Luningning Minguez

My Love

Rating: 5.0


What is love if love is not around?
If love does not sing
'I love you' anymore
Or play no music at all?

What is love if love is not there?
If love has taken
my soul and my air?
Though love was true, it's just not fair!

So does my love wants to love
but cannot love anymore
Yes... my love has gone,
Am I worth dying for?

What is love if love is all but nowhere?
If love is ought to be love
yet no love at all
If love has died, what was that for?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 24 June 2009

well written self contemplation about love...a favorite theme by all poets...well expressed into poetic diction...lovely....10

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Ruerd Visser 24 June 2009

Great piece 9± Id be greatfull if you could take the time to read love is.........., the will of the heavens? Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

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~ Jon London ~ 24 June 2009

A loving piece, clearly written from the heart and expressed with a natural poetic soul....keep expressing my friend...you have a gift.

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Sherif Monem 24 June 2009

PAINFUL ENQUIRY. GOOD JOB.

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Mehreen Mujeeb 26 June 2009

very nicely expressed. the tone of the poem is beautiful. it flows great and oozes soul

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Dana Soumbouloglou 12 August 2009

Loved reading ur poem.. liked it :)

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comatose 02 July 2009

good poem,10

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Mifael Llauderes 26 June 2009

really deep eloquent writing...sad and beautiful at the same time. God bless

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Nikunj Sharma 26 June 2009

What is love if love is not there? If love has taken my soul and my air? Though love was true, it's just not fair! nice write, pls read my poems- SMILES, BOOKMARK, CAN I BE?

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premji premji 26 June 2009

love is our very being

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