My Love Poem by Lily Law

My Love

Rating: 5.0


When I am awake,

All I see is your face,

When I am asleep,

All I dream is you...


You, my love,

Is my world,

Now and forever,

For infinity...


Your sweet voice captivated me in my territory,

Your smile shine like a pearl beneath the luminous sunshine,

Your eyes penetrated into my heart and soul,

You, my love always mesmerized me with your strong yet gentle gestures,

And never fail to strung me with your deep and wise thought...


You never realize that you that make my world evolve,

Commander of the sun and the moon,

Conductor of the breeze and the wind,

Keeper of the mother nature herself,

And painter of the rainbow and the star..


You never know that you had save me from the reaper that always hangs around me,

Pulling me out from the darkness,

Toward the light,

Forcing me to emerge from the hole...

And into the divine passage..


For this I owed you my life and my soul,

For this I will always be your loyal companion,

In the shadow of yours,

Till HE welcome me home..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 11 November 2011

beautiful poem Lily.straight from heart.loved it.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

all i can say is that.. ur poem is lovely and wonderful! ! as are u! ! bravo

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nomad omnia 17 March 2009

Beautiful Lily - it flows like clear water

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~ Jon London ~ 01 March 2009

Loving words placed in all the right flow. Nice work 10

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Kesav Easwaran 24 February 2009

'You never realize that you that make my world evolve, Commander of the sun and the moon, Conductor of the breeze and the wind, Keeper of the mother nature herself, And painter of the rainbow and the star'... how wonderfully artfully you express your devotional love, Lily! lovely write on intimate love feelings...10

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Lily Law

Lily Law

Sarawak, Malaysia
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