My Love... Poem by Raihana Abdul Jabbar

My Love...

Rating: 4.0


Dreams spinned away,
Silvery webs around me...
Drifted, I amidst them,
When a rustle woke me up...

As the graceful 'sleep fairy',
Refused to grant a spell...
Stepped I, lightly onto the balcony...
Feeling the 'magic' around me...

The breeze fetched me,
The fragrance of wild jasmine blooms....
Surprized at the supressed giggle,
I stared at the perky red rose on the sill...

She whispered 'Up there! He's up there! '
My eyes searched for him,
The starry black sky...
And instantly fell in love!

There, among the cotton clouds,
Winking down at me,
Was the handsome, elegant prince,
My love, The Moon...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazem Al Jaber 11 October 2008

beautiful...you penned it as well.. keep on

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C T Heart 11 October 2008

A love in a midnight sky, beautiful imagery used. Well crafted a 10.

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Hana K 11 October 2008

wow agree with Sarwar Chowdhury! i fall in love with this poem! ! ! this's beautiful! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 September 2014

True love is the key about life; bringing peace to all. E.K.L.

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 04 August 2012

I must say sister, keep writing... U have a good hand at the nature....

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Rachel Butler 11 October 2009

Was the handsome, elegant prince, Rachel Ann Butler

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john v 26 October 2008

love arouse in my heart for an great piece of art written with a great imagintion it made permanent stay in my heart's junction i cant think or write anymore for there is nothin but your poem in my poetic store

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 October 2008

It's amazing Raihana. Cute poem. Love it with my 10.

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