My Love (1) Poem by laila lili

My Love (1)

Rating: 4.8


Dont worry my lady
i am stilling in my past usual
set every morning in that red cup
terning it upside go to another world and remember
youur saying when you were buying it
this is my present for you
i know that you worth more than that
but to remember me every morning
when you are drinking your coffee in my red cup..................
My love.........
Let me get up my dream in your smiling
every morning with my brown coffee
to start my long day with the word i love you
yesterday i didnt sleep after hearing your voice
after i closed my phone
the melody of your voice dancing in my hearing
in suddenly from me
i went to the ends of my heart
to say my missing for you
and after your pic set in my imagine
i tried to close my tierd eyes
wishing to sea you in my dream
but you didnt come
and after i get up my hope has been renewed
to sea you in the real
so i wish to sea you soon
My love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
sara }i{ 02 January 2009

i like it so much wonderful words

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 January 2009

romantic write....keep on writing laila....i like this piece...full of emotions....of longing....

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Miral El Nahry 08 January 2009

It's really romantic, i like it! Keep up the good work

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Blue Eyes 08 January 2009

very nice poem keep sharing.

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Ershad Mazumder 11 January 2009

I like this type of poem.

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3wwad 52 08 September 2009

nice work...you have away with expressing feelings.9

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Akram Awadat 29 June 2009

good work, i like it 10

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premji premji 27 January 2009

dear laila.... lovely lines...thanks.....

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Catrina Heart 25 January 2009

Beautiful poem with such a lovely last verse...10+

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Sebastine Humaemo 15 January 2009

lines done with love and affection.......pleasant all the way.....sebastine

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