My List Poem by Ashlie Ony

My List

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A baby, a husband, a ring, and a wedding is this the order things come in.
Turn this list round and round then you'll see the way things really comes in.

His baby is wonderful and it's mine.
He says he loves me so true I know.
I say I love him but my family says no.
Baby coming, I yell, I scream, Push it's here.
Girl or boy I don't know but it's the most beautiful things I've ever seen.

My baby, my husband, my ring, and my wedding now turn my list round and round you'll see the order things went in.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashlie O 28 June 2008

I was in random thought when i wrote this. I am not pregnant or married and i have no kid. just random thought

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 28 June 2008

Hello poet, interesting poem and sounds like you have thought of everything. Please see my poem 'Looking for Love? ' and 'Sir Cricket Finds Love' Have a great day, Loyd

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