My Life Poem by Olive Bailey

My Life



My life perfect to some others,
but to me my life may be fun sometimes,
on other days it is sad,
loosing friends can be sad,
but sometimes it can be a good thing,
being a friend to someone not fun,
nice people are good to play with

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rita Shay 23 June 2009

The poem started out good and it got confusing and out of hand after the fifth line. I think you have a lot of potential.

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