My Journey Poem by Somanathan Iyer

My Journey

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A long distance I walked so far in my path of life
Unknown to me how far still I need to cover
Weary and drowsy, forlorn by fallacies
Dreaded even to rest with dire times reaching a crest
The road I walked along never had any shelters
Nor had big trees to rest under for a while
My rest was confined to standing under small trees
Trekking along rocks and walking on sands
Quenching my thirst from murky waters
Sufficing my appetite with fruits left over by birds
The road behind me awful and dreaded
Nothing to rejoice better to bury the memoirs
Captive of illusion I continued my journey
Knowing not what in store I intend to move ahead
My hopes are skeptical as illusions are optical
Mirages or miracles call it by any name
Hope I, the road ahead be a respite towards my end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

with hope the road ahead will be much better than in the past. peaceful and soothing. good write about life.

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David Wood 19 July 2013

Very much like 'The Road Not Travelled' by Robert Frost or my 'The Path Undecided'. A good write.

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Valerie Dohren 18 July 2013

One should always remain hopeful of better times ahead, even though the future seems dim. Very good write.

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Valsa George 18 July 2013

The road ahead, let us hope, is a road smooth and straight with shade and shelter, unlike the road left behind! A great write, but a little distressing!

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