My Inspiration (You) Poem by lady grace

My Inspiration (You)

Rating: 4.8


as i touch the bottom of the sea
down to the depth of the earth’s core
as i go beyond the clouds
and kiss the morning light
where cliff hanging bridges
painted rainbow burning bright...

tears in my eyes
no one can determine
when to stop …when to end
they are falls from the sky
that act as bridges on the cliff
perform as a killing hammer
in the hearts of mankind...

can’t hide these feelings
from his observant eyes
the vigilant angel is entrapped
captured by his loving arms...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
You And Me 23 November 2009

I am new........... beyond the clouds there is no morning only rays, rain bow never burn thinly vanish....... in the poetic sense beyond the clouds in gracious glittering white of diamond wane rainbow........ may be you are right from your angle being an angle....... and life is for smile smile smile.............

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Eyan Desir 23 November 2009

Awwww, very sweet and poetic beautiful, beautiful, beautiful Well done Grace

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Ency Bearis 23 November 2009

sensational adoration.....well delivered and so sweet.....10

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Catrina Heart 24 November 2009

can’t hide these feelings from his observant eyes the vigilant angel is entrapped captured by his loving arms... so inspired by...............sweet and love glows through the page! ! !

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Eyan Desir 19 April 2010

This is so poetic My goodness Amazing I wonder who taught yah...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2009

can’t hide these feelings from his observant eyes the vigilant angel is entrapped captured by his loving arms.......so sacred and devoted feeling but should not fall from eyes as it may bring some shame... lo vley and inspiration poem....10

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Ravi Sathasivam 02 December 2009

'can’t hide these feelings from his observant eyes the vigilant angel is entrapped captured by his loving arms... ' Amazing write. Well done A beautiful heartfelt poem Enjoyed reading it 10+

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A beautiful heartfelt poem Lady Grace. I loved the part nature played. 10 love Karin

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Chris Newlash 25 November 2009

amazing piece well done, and very vidid. thank you for comming my poem 'blue eyes' and i'm sorry its taken so long to return a comment : D

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