My Identity! Poem by Valsa George

My Identity!

Rating: 4.0


To fit into another's mould
Constantly changed shape
Now I am not what I am.

That's my Identity! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

But you can reshape yourself at a later time perhaps!

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Valerie Dohren 22 November 2012

Deep down you will always be who you are, you just need to recognize it - to thine own self be true.

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Anita Sehgal 23 November 2012

truly said... we try so hard to be what we are not..

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Kee Thampi 23 November 2012

A thimble but humble to protect u... the God of( mad) another's mould

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Chandra Thiagarajan 25 November 2012

Nice poem! We often try to adjust to others wishes thereby losing ourselves. Best regards, Chandra Thiagarajan

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 20 December 2014

The very truth spelt out here, going through many a strife, many a path, many a shape, we lose at last our own identity and that becomes our identity......Valsa......very intelligently crafted.......10

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Walterrean Salley 15 December 2012

... Now I am not what I am. It's always best to be yourself. You have a unique mould, and cannot fit just any mould. It only works when you are yourself. Small, but powerful. I enjoyed.

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Vipins Puthooran 06 December 2012

Now I am not what I am/ Amazing line...I felt this line on my senses)))

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Valerie Dohren 05 December 2012

We all try to be what we believe others expect us to be, and so lose sight of who we really are. Good one.

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Anita Sehgal 03 December 2012

this is so true.. we go thru life like this and never find our true self!

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