When i am down and nobody's around
On my feet i come to you and bow down
You will calm my aching heart
Knowing that i am at my best
Filling my mind at rest
You are my hiding place
You made me strong when i am weak
You wiped away my tears, and made me whole
In everything i do, i give in to you
My victory, my pain and sufferings
I surrender everything
every teardrops that falls on your knees
you will listen to the cry of my heart
you will listen to the anguish of my soul
Hear me...I'm calling...
Meggie that was so beautiful coming straight from the heart.10
nice to be published for....a child prayer....simple that dictate a simple God to listen.....God bless.....a 10 +++++
A very calming peaceful prayer, written from your loving heart Meggie, 10 Lynda xx
When i am down and nobody's around On my feet i come to you and bow down You will calm my aching heart Knowing that i am at my best Filling my mind at rest i come to you for all my problems.... u will grant me all peae....10 read mine merci, rain god, , , yes to to, ...miss i miss u
a soul stirring poem meggie...we all need a person who bears our tears and listen s to our cry...a poem from your heart...this goes into my favs
You are my hiding place You made me strong when i am weak You wiped away my tears, and made me whole In everything i do, i give in to you My victory, my pain and sufferings --------- well worded and great flow in eloquence............You have a great faith my friend...10
Meggie, You have understood the essence of Gita when you say: In everything i do, i give in to you My victory, my pain and sufferings In Chapter 18, Verse 66 of Bhagvat Gita, Lord Krishana says, 'Relinquishing all ideas of righteousness, surrender unto Me exclusively, I will deliver you from all sinful reactions, do not despair.' CP
I think we all need a hiding place such as yours where we know we are truly loved and God will hear our prayer. This is so heartfelt and simply beautiful. Karin Anderson
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a beautiful safe hiding place