Adeline Foster

Rookie - 299 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

.My Heart Is Native


An Indian maid with long plaited hair
Indian tunes crooning through the air
Could not I be she?
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  • Rookie - 473 Points Phyllis Strong (8/3/2013 9:22:00 AM)

    We are all one big puzzle, embrace diversity and let the pieces come together, because with pieces missing we will never see the big picture. Thanks for sharing your thoughts Adeline, we are all different, but still the same.

    Phyllis (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (5/24/2013 4:15:00 PM)

    under the skin we are all the same. We all came here and will leave the same way. We are all GOD'S creation. nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Yash Shinde (10/27/2012 8:07:00 AM)

    very touching a great and wonderful write............delivers........ a great message...lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Travis Ciempa (6/18/2012 11:58:00 AM)

    Very moving... You are a great writer, I read some of your other poems as well, this is my favorite - Trav (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joy A (3/24/2012 9:14:00 PM)

    whatta lovely poem., (Report) Reply

  • Rookie igor Grey Balatsky (2/11/2012 4:36:00 AM)

    We are the same inside – in our divine and godlike nature: the lonely souls, strangers in the universe, the little drops in the Causal Ocean, the pure particles of Absolute. A brilliant thoughtful piece of poetry. Thank you for your wisdom, Adeline. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points G Sweeney (10/14/2011 1:34:00 AM)

    oh what a lovely poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (7/27/2011 12:23:00 PM)

    Nice stanzas and amazing views of watching the nature that is called really native
    thanks for sharing 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Ebi Robert (7/5/2011 11:18:00 AM)

    amighty work of your ink. splendid (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,738 Points Smoky Hoss (5/12/2011 4:29:00 PM)

    Superb thoughts, and so illuminatingly spoken, with such wonder and wisdom. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 36 Points Mohammad Muzzammil (12/23/2010 2:46:00 AM)

    Nice poem presenting the deep love for native country, India. Of course, you could be she. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Rolland (10/14/2010 2:57:00 PM)

    I love the poem, this is an excellent way to convey a sweet message of love, deep sentiments lead the world to a better place....Peace and love

    yann (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rachel Ann Butler (1/30/2010 9:24:00 AM)

    'Under the skin are we not the same'

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (10/31/2009 12:39:00 PM)

    A wonderful message amazingly expressed. Thanks for sharing, Adeline.
    Best wishes. Yelena M. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (10/6/2009 12:21:00 PM)

    Hi Adeline, It is very beautiful and kind poem, from your heart falls fantastic stars... 10...
    Best wishes,
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Godspower Oshodin (6/19/2009 2:48:00 PM)

    you're a poetic mentor.....your poem is classic. like i said intially 'You're a cynosure of panache' (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 893 Points James B. Earley (3/18/2009 12:06:00 PM)

    A poignant introspection. If only the world would see...and understand! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 124 Points James Timothy Jarrett (1/14/2009 6:23:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem that speaks to all of us who are native in spirit (all humans) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samuel Pennell (1/3/2009 1:01:00 PM)

    Wow, this is truly fabtastic, I love your poems, I am adding you to my favorites!

    Please give my poems a look!
    http: //poemhunter.com/samuel-stuart-pennell/

    Samuel Stuart Pennell (Report) Reply



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