**my Heart Is Bleeding** Poem by Saane Pahulu

**my Heart Is Bleeding**

Rating: 2.4


My heart is bleeding
for the one who was leading,
now I'm just fleeing
coz I thought you heard my pleading.
I don't think I'm fine
I really wanted you to be mine
though I left you so many signs
now I'm walking the line.
Alone and pitiful
we could've been so beautiful
My hearts no longer full
now only sad and blue.
I guess its time to move on
now that my babys gone
the night has become dull including the moon
coz baby you left me too soon.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 23 December 2019

A heartfelt rendition elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful and very compassionate write. Thanks for sharing, Shane.

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Nathan Barkley 08 November 2009

i remember that feeling

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Black & White Right 26 August 2009

this poem..so sad..so familair..

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