My Heart Beats A-Z Letters (First Tanka) Poem by Harindhar Reddy

My Heart Beats A-Z Letters (First Tanka)

Rating: 4.5


(In TANKA syllable count is 5-7-5-7-7 (3 Tankas)
1) I bought a pen named
Friendship to write an essay
On you, feelings choked
Till I gave up, and I met
You, god smiled at me my dear.

2) Daffodils dances if
I meet you everyday, from
Depths of the ocean,
Heights of the Everest, I
Love you with my heart and soul

3) For you my heart beats
Letters A-Z When I miss
MANAS, I bought a
Diamond, I compared it with
You, it burst like dynamite!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 17 September 2013

Wow. Wonderful write..Just loved reading them all.

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for a wonderful review on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Harindhar Reddy 17 September 2013

Thanks to Shazia Batool, Heather Wilkins, Abdul Wahab ji for their insightful comments.

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Wahab Abdul 17 September 2013

this is very fine Harindhar, nicely penned..your new attempt...lovely enjoyed especially the first one!

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

I'm honoured by a nice comment on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Heather Wilkins 16 September 2013

a good series of the tanka form. well written

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

I'm honoured by marvellous review on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Shahzia Batool 16 September 2013

Hyperbolic images are blended with passion, rather than being highlighted as an extra thing...form and theme both well worked out! ! !

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for a nice comment on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Harindhar Reddy

Harindhar Reddy

Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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