My Heart Poem by Akhtar Jawad

My Heart

Rating: 5.0


Can't you leave me alone in the moonlit night?
My brain, for the whole of month, like a slave,
I moved in your hot and bright sunlight,
Please for a few hours let me live as a knave.

Meanwhile you may go to a peaceful cave,
I promise to accept your ethics and laws,
Come at dawn you'll find me brave,
Although I'll see in your laws many flaws!

I know besides giving laws for the life,
As everyone has his own approach,
You will provide me a reason to strife,
At times you fail as a successful coach.

At the moment I am just a tuning flute,
My strings are vibrant like a guitar,
Moon is looking so pretty and cute,
On the blue sky I see a star.

A bud is twisting her soft pink petals,
A flower is about to blossom in the night,
Moonlight can melt the human metals,
You like solids with a polish too bright.

I'm a slave of my beautiful heart,
Output of heart is nice and appealing,
Yes I am weak and I repel your thwart
Wounds you gave my heart is healing.

Saturday, February 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 28 February 2015

This is an exceptional work...a soul at one with the maker of the universe. Wonderful. A 10.

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Khalid Saifullah 21 February 2015

A beautiful and meaningful poem..............10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 February 2015

A bud is twisting her soft pink petals, A flower is about to blossom in the night, Moonlight can melt the human metals, You like solids with a polish too bright..........yes, moonlight can melt the human metal. Very nicely it has been composed.A beautiful and meaningful poem. Many thanks dear sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 February 2015

A bud is twisting her soft pink petals, A flower is about to blossom in the night, Moonlight can melt the human metals, You like solids with a polish too bright..........yes, moonlight can melt the human metal. Very nicely it has been composed.A beautiful and meaningful poem. Many thanks dear sir.

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