My Heart Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

My Heart

Rating: 5.0


'My heart
Is numbing
And in distress...
As I chain this night
And the stars beside me...
Like a grass thirsty for you
Who am I for you to take notice
And in your musings to think about.'

Sunday, August 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 04 September 2014

Very good poem, a resignation of sorts lies beneath the words, in the line: Who am I for you to take notice. Kind of pulls at my heart to feel your distress. Great expression of your true thoughts, I love it. I give it a 10. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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