My Hand Poem by Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

My Hand

Rating: 5.0


I offer you my hand
straight from the heart

A hand of surrender
to my feelings for you

A hand that always
will protect you

A hand that'll go
through fire for you

But it is also a hand
that's terrified
that your hand will let go

Friday, March 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 06 March 2015

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 06 March 2015

Wonderful hand that always comes up. Nicely presented poem.

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Liza Sudina 15 October 2015

Your poems ae full of love, because they are dedicated and written with care about that YOU whom you love so much!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 July 2017

This is a smartest poem, BUT few would be aware of it, sure, read the last line and THINK. Thank you so much for this most beautiful and meaningful poem of LIFE. With the very best wishes, Sylvia Frances Chan, poetess, evangelist and world traveler. God´s Blessings in Abundance. NOTE: my comment for FORBIDDEN FRUIT was not placed, reason unknown. That was a very important response upon the poem, it looked like GOD did not wish that.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 July 2017

ANOTHER NEWEST NOTE: That poem is found back. Thank you all for your attention and the most for the Poet himself, Dankjewel, groetjes, Sylvia Frances Chan

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Navod Dilhara 05 February 2020

Simple and fascinating.A great piece of work.

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A B Faniki 05 October 2019

Beautiful simply beautiful. A creative and heartwarming piece. Thanks for sharing such great write

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Adeeb Alfateh 16 July 2019

A hand that always will protect you A hand that'll go through fire for you beautiful expression beautiful 10+++++++++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 October 2018

its always good and great humanitarian hand - great poem

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Britte Ninad 29 May 2018

an offering with joy and sorrow nice 10+++

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