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My Guitar. - Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

my guitar has six strings,
it gets lonely when nobody sings,
musical and magical,
my pick makes my guitar sound so magical,
and no matter were i go shes right there,
when i play my guitar people always stare,
we sound so good together,
i hope my guitar will stay with me forever,
my guitar has six strings.
but it gets lonely when no one sings,
my guitar is never out of tune,
it doesnt matter who i play it too,
wether you're happy, mad or feeling blue,
just remember my guitar will help you get thru.

Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

Comments about My Guitar. by JOSE MURGUIA

  • Rookie Eric Adams (2/2/2009 7:59:00 AM)

    i don't know its good (Report) Reply

    4 person liked.
    3 person did not like.
  • Rookie James Nall (1/30/2009 9:46:00 AM)

    good content, great idea, work on your spelling (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (1/19/2009 8:25:00 PM)

    This poem needs more internal symmetry. It has some, but it needs more.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Blue Sky (1/19/2009 3:34:00 PM)

    I like how everything flows really great together. It's very smooth and very poetic. I really like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie sumaira (1/19/2009 4:40:00 AM)

    It must b magical guitar than wow! Keep playing and writing good job... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Linda Winchell (1/17/2009 1:58:00 PM)

    I have always wanted to play a guitar. But all I was cut out to do was play the pots and pans in the kitchen! Have you heard me? LOL
    Good piece, says a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Fieldson (1/14/2009 7:37:00 PM)

    simple and beautiful, it says so much..
    I really like the way you express your thoughts. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 21, 2009

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