My Guitar. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

My Guitar.

Rating: 3.9


my guitar has six strings,
it gets lonely when nobody sings,
musical and magical,
my pick makes my guitar sound so magical,
and no matter were i go shes right there,
when i play my guitar people always stare,
we sound so good together,
i hope my guitar will stay with me forever,
my guitar has six strings.
but it gets lonely when no one sings,
my guitar is never out of tune,
it doesnt matter who i play it too,
wether you're happy, mad or feeling blue,
just remember my guitar will help you get thru.


1/11/2009
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Fieldson 14 January 2009

simple and beautiful, it says so much.. I really like the way you express your thoughts.

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Linda Winchell 17 January 2009

I have always wanted to play a guitar. But all I was cut out to do was play the pots and pans in the kitchen! Have you heard me? LOL Good piece, says a lot!

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Eric Adams 02 February 2009

i don't know its good

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James Nall 30 January 2009

good content, great idea, work on your spelling

5 5 Reply
Greenwolfe 1962 19 January 2009

This poem needs more internal symmetry. It has some, but it needs more. GW62

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Blue Sky 19 January 2009

I like how everything flows really great together. It's very smooth and very poetic. I really like it.

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sumaira .....ir 19 January 2009

It must b magical guitar than wow! Keep playing and writing good job...

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