My Guide- My Mother Poem by Nishtha Dutta

My Guide- My Mother

Rating: 4.5


Like a whisper among the clatter
Like a praise among the flatter
That is how you are to me

If the world is round then
You are the rim for me
Among the sounds
And heckles you are the
Supple symphony

A revelation for life
An endorsement unseen
Like smooth pedestal
But quite strong to feel
You are always near me
But never wish to be seen

Like a grail among the steins
Like a help among the rails

Like a whisper and the praise......


this poem is for my best friend, guide and everything... and one and only my mom.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

Nice dedication! ! Mother and daughter! Musing along with your poetry. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, nishtha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chandra Thiagarajan 30 September 2012

I am sorry for I could chance to read your magnificent poem only now. It's really special in that such a wonderful poem has been penned by a very young girl.Keep it up.Try writing more.You've got great talents.I'm sure you'll rise to great heights as a poet.Thanks and very best wishes.

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Misbah Uddin 30 July 2012

excellent! I am really amazed reading this poem. Its wonderful! ! :)

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Abhishek Tiwari 12 April 2012

You definetly worth a praise.. Specially the feeling conveyed by the lines-'and never wish to be seen' indicating her selfless gestures, Nice

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