My Girl Friend Poem by aung si myanmar

My Girl Friend

Rating: 4.8


Her eyes are demure diamonds
Below the rainbows of eyebrows.

Her cheeks are twin rubies
With cute dimples in harmony.

Her lip is the rosy wine
That I sip with melody rhymes.

Her body is a charming verse
Full with the beauties of missing breath.

Her style is the latest brand
Similar with the fame of sun.

Her scent is sweet aroma
That I eagerly embrace forever.

She is only one my heart-star
That will shimmer after shimmer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Harrison 24 August 2012

It seems that the person in your life means a lot too you, she seems to be a amazing person and you enjoy being in her company, you gave great descriptive words in that we get a real picture of this person who you are in love with

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Ketan Hukare 06 October 2012

Great words! Encore! Reading your poems makes my day!

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Grant Lovell 06 September 2012

Excellent! well-crafted! Have fun, till the end!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 August 2012

super super 10+++

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Poetheart Morgan 24 August 2012

Good rhyme and rhythm. Like it. Enjoy your girl friend.

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Eindaray Kyaw 24 August 2012

Your words are really sharp and deep enough to describe your girl friend's beauty! You know, the verseHer lip is the rosy wine That I sip with melody rhymes.makes me smile! Your poem is also melodious like your girl's body! !

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