My Friends Poem by Cassandra Jasmine

My Friends

Rating: 4.8


My friends here,
Are the shiniest of diamonds,
They are sparkling topazes,
They are priceless gems.

An annoying me,
Yet you all tolerate it.
Like a fresh-mown lawn,
Being dug up by a gofer.

My friends,
You understand me.
You help me,
And I am full of gratitude.

Thank you,
To all of you
Who helped me,
With comments and all,
To becoming a better writer.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I would like to thank the following people who have not only encouraged me with my writing, but also pointed out which places I might lack in:
1) Beach Girl - Fairly generous with comments
2) Goldheart Bird - The dearest sister ever
3) Alookh :) - The brother I never had
4) Alisha Alphonse - Kind, funny, and very, very helpful!
5) Abhishek Kumar - Kind, supportive, and fun to talk to :)
6) And last but not least, Mr. Khairul Ahsan - Whom ever so often comments on my poems, and lets me know where I have done 'nice', or 'not bad'.

Thank you everyone!
Cassandra J.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdallah Gamal 05 December 2013

That was very nice from you.. An amazing write :)

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 October 2013

Wow adorable beautiful friendly poem esp d 1st stanza! Do review my latest on masquerade ball.

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Goldheart Bird 01 October 2013

Beutiful poem sis! : D Thanks for including me! ! ! ! :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

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Abhishek Mishra 30 September 2013

Lovely poem dedicated to your friends..: -) not forget this new friend: -P

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Khairul Ahsan 28 September 2013

The poem is sweet, the poet is sweeter. At such a tender age she writes so well. I have no doubt she will soon carve a niche for herself in the realm of poetry. Thanks, dear poet, for mentioning my name. It's always a pleasure to read your poems and also to comment as long as you want them.

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