My First Try Poem by Noor Othman

My First Try

Rating: 5.0


this is my very first try
submitting a poem online
don't ask me the reason why
I waste my precious time

I have lots of stuff to do
but my mind is currently clogged
In such instances I usually do
write poetry or visit someone's blog

Time spent may only be minutes
It's good enough to unwind
I am surprise the result I will meet
And the brain is fresh again I find

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 27 July 2011

Very happy you made the move online. A very smooth flowing poem that is a pleasure to read. Keep posting your poetry. Well done.

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Spiritual Seeker 18 July 2011

Welcome poet...to a world of spirituality, friendship....looking forward to more of your poems! Great lines for a ''first try''...kindly comment on my poems in your precious free time..Thnx

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