Richard Lackman

Rookie - 88 Points (Philadelphia)

my first kiss


I still remember my first kiss though fourty years have passed
The beauty of the moment and the thrill will ever last
Etched into my memory as words into a stone
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  • Rookie Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan (10/17/2013 10:53:00 PM)

    Dear Richard, your poem definitely touches a chord in many people's heart - including mine! ! . You have a definite natural talent. Wish you all the best for the contest. I shall be very happy if you win at least one of the prizes! But you cannot predict anything in an Online Contest like this - which can be easily manipulated by cyber savvy poets! ! (See my poem Poem Hunter Contest Final just to have an idea of how a contest can be manipulated...) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Melissa Carey (5/8/2012 12:09:00 AM)

    I always say there are no words to explain my first kiss and I am still with my first and only love. And in your words, I went back to that moment, my very first kiss and though we all have different experiences, you worded this in a way that we can all relate too. And at the same time, this is a look into a special moment in your life. I think my favorite lines were Clearer than the clearest night that I have ever known and
    When finally it ended I knew this had been a kiss. Exactly how I felt. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 618 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (5/7/2012 12:40:00 AM)

    first love, first crush, first kiss, first period, first child...our lives give us so many firsts to keep etched in our memories for ever... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Robert Burns (5/5/2012 10:41:00 PM)

    Dr. Lackman said it so well, I will not tread on his sweet memory, not yet dead. Instead, I will offer
    it up to others as kiss well done, not one made just for fun. Robert Burns, Portland, Or. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (4/29/2012 3:36:00 PM)

    Definitely I agree with Valerie, this is beautiful and well penned! Your memory is brilliant and I think you still feel the joy of this unforgettable kiss! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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