My First Kiss Poem by Nicholas Hrynchuk

My First Kiss

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This may not be the best I've written,
But in a good way I'm smitten,
You gave me my first kiss,
And everything felt perfect

What can I say? ,
You made my day,
Today was great,
And I felt my heart inflate

I didn't expect it,
My heart stopped in that second which split,
Your lips touched mine,
And everything felt fine,
If not better

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ella Leiva 07 May 2010

Is she the one you had written so much? ? :)

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Andrea Segundo 07 May 2010

Nice seemed it went a perfect day, if not better. love how some rhymes and can see the imagery. Love the poem

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