My First Crush Poem by Valsa George

There you are madam.. Fine rendering, innocent and candid speaking of thoughts. But not awaiting to read the tale of the next crush if any..

Beautiful, teenage innocence confessed. Poignant yet it gave me a chuckle of the little girl's first encounter! Great write!

wow mam beautifully expressed feelings: -)

Hello poet Valsa. Thank you for your recent review. I enjoyed your poem and have been in those shoes before, you described it precisely! Loyd

This poem resonates with me. The wonders of intense infatuation.. that holds us spellbound A marvelous poem that expresses in beautiful detail the feelings or secret burning desire to be with someone who you find very attractive and so special. It brings back memories of that wonderful feeling that will always be remembered and treasured. A beautiful poem. So well expressed. Loved reading it.Five Stars! ! !

In reading this poem I am suddenly overwhelmed with memories of my first crush, and my feelings of love sickness that plagued me when I was near her, that sense of aching I could never describe. I think you have perfectly articulated those feelings down for me in more tender words Valsa. A ballad for all first crushes! . You could have been my Sara!

My heart began to race My breath got hitched My lips went dry and parched I didn’t hear what he asked......amazing depiction relating to crush. A gorgeous poem with touching expression is aptly presented here. Thanks for sharing.10

oh yeah, to MyPoemList for sure! Anonymous :) :) :)

WOW! Wow! ! wow! ! ! were we ten years old? ? if only i'd known how i would affect you, i would have turned and walked away without a word! that is how much i LOVED you when we were 10! ! ! i would have sacrificed my own passion to bring you comfort. thinking about you.........still. day and night. ESPECIALLY at night! ! ! Anonymous :)