Jitendra Kumar Sahoo

Rookie - 23 Points (17.5.1995 / INDIA, STATE-ODISHA, DIST-KORAPUT, SUNABEDA)

My First Beloved ≪3 - Poem by Jitendra Kumar Sahoo

For the first time when I opened my baby eyes
I saw this nature with a red morning sky
And I had been fallen in love
Now my small in love flying like a small dove

For the first time I saw her beauty
And started to love her as its my duty
I wants to remained as a lover
Of her for forever

My love is immortal
And my beloved is also immortal
Every morning she had a new makeup
Makes me happy when I wakeup

Wow! ! She looks so beautiful
And made all my days cheerful
Where ever I can travel & where ever I can see
My beloved girlfriend is always with me

I may grew old
But my love will remain young
As my love story, I shared with you and you told
It to others by singing this evergreen love song

This love made me a poet and lover of unique
And made me different from my friends as fast as quick
So, I would remain a young lover
And this nature would be my first beloved for forever!

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The nature is my first beloved...........about her i had written apoem..........so read and enjoy it! !

Comments about My First Beloved ≪3 by Jitendra Kumar Sahoo

  • Silver Star - 3,660 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (10/8/2015 3:54:00 AM)

    what a wonderful poem, Jitendra! your flow of emotions and feelings more than make up for the errors. Thanks for sharing this poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 30 Points Shashikant Nishant Sharma (6/19/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    brilliant expression of nature's beauty. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Miss Darkness (6/18/2012 6:48:00 PM)

    loved this one the way u express ur love to the nature fantastic! ! nice words and nice expressions (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Oludipe Oyin Samuel (6/18/2012 1:31:00 PM)

    A syntillating piece of utmost reverence for Nature's tidings. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 18, 2012

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