Payal Parande

Rookie - 85 Points (8-7-1994)

My Fellow Poet


In a black coal mine
You are the diamond in the rough
Shimmering as blazing as sun
You have power to make us blind
With your sheen

On the saddest day of the life
You are the miraculous joy
Vehement, frenzied and raving
You have power to make us cry
With a laugh so hard

In the abandoned entity
You are a pleasant friend
Amusing, affectionate and authentic
You have power
To make a veteran truth false

I hoped you'll stay long
But you may go because you wish to be so
But the time with you
Was crucial, candied and charming
And no matter how far we live
No matter how critical time we'll go through
I'll always miss you
I'll always miss you

Submitted: Friday, October 19, 2012
Edited: Monday, October 22, 2012

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

hello again,

this poem is for a fellow poet form this site 'Jahan Zeb'
he is from my neighbor country and i am not going to lie but since i was little i heard horrible things about India and Pakistan fight but when i started to talk with this person he made those all horrible things disappear and i am glad he did so and i am also very great full for his kind words to me he always makes me laugh he is a superb person...

but now he decided to leave this site and i really don't know the reason...but his poems are brilliant they are fabulous, fantastic and i don't want someone who is so good should go thinking his work is not appreciated cause i know it is....


love
payal

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  • Gold Star - 10,425 Points Valsa George (7/9/2014 5:38:00 AM)

    A wonderful tribute to a fellow poet......! Written from the depth of your heart, it has the power of genuine emotions and the beauty and strength of a great poem.... Good job Payal...! He will be ever grateful to you! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,940 Points Patricia Grantham (7/13/2013 12:24:00 PM)

    Very good Payal. This is a good poem written to a personal poet
    friend. As we meet others on PH we can become a family of friends,
    acquaintance or even brothers and sisters from near or even
    across the oceans. Please read my poem A Member to Remember
    A very worthy write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (4/23/2013 1:35:00 PM)

    Indeed a touching, endearing & loving thoughts mixed poem.....show your respect & friendship filled emotions & feelings which you have for Jahan Zaib..nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,633 Points Is It Poetry (4/20/2013 12:57:00 PM)

    When love and friendship
    like a ship collide
    When waves
    the sea
    I see them never cry
    To my heart
    I ask it never why..........iip (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Xxxxxx Xxxxxxxxx (4/20/2013 8:15:00 AM)

    Congrats on your very touching poem, a genuine write about respect, friendship and loss. I am late in finding your words but I will be reading your work over the next few days. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jubril Balogun (3/2/2013 1:58:00 AM)

    *tearing streams of friendliness*
    *saltish feel of aloneness*
    *memories of ageless moments*
    *shores the lips in wearied contempt*
    *O dear friend! *
    I'll miss u,
    I'll miss u.

    Hope it is to your liking? A reflection of my love for your words. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kishor Pathak (1/4/2013 2:33:00 PM)

    Only a genuine disciple can do this Payal...No matter what others say or feel if you owe you should bow and that's what you proved through this cordial composition....Keep up the good work.... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,486 Points Neela Nath (12/10/2012 9:08:00 PM)

    Lovely. Payel, politicians made us think so. They kiss snake and the snake -charmer, at the same time. Above all, it's a nice piece regarding fellow feeling and sense of fraternity. A big salute to you Lil poetess. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie So Close (11/30/2012 4:49:00 AM)

    feelings poured....really enjoyed it and lets hope he will continue here....great work..keep on writing.

    »so close« (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 306 Points Shahzia Batool (11/10/2012 9:03:00 AM)

    I hoped you'll stay long...a heart-felt poem...thank you for contextualizing your content payal...that makes an easy reach... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Meera Panigrahi (11/4/2012 7:11:00 AM)

    Love no season knows nor clime
    Poets and artists are linked each to each by their feelings
    No boundaries does the heart know
    India or Pakistan-
    All are one
    Here at the threshold of words
    Doors are wide as the sea
    All are free to enter.
    Payal you are lovely.
    Your words and feelings too. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,656 Points Walterrean Salley (10/28/2012 1:56:00 AM)

    A very good job, and touching. I'm sure that your friend is quite pleased. May he be happy and continue to write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eindaray Kyaw (10/26/2012 9:31:00 AM)

    How nice and pleased to enjoy this one is! you are kind...i can see through your poems.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Jahan Zeb (10/26/2012 8:05:00 AM)

    A poet from our language said about poets, Poets are skinless creature. That is true. they are moved easily. They feel pain for the wounds of others. They will weep for small and minor emotional situations. Thanks Payal. You poem shows you great. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Yewande Adedokun (10/25/2012 5:32:00 AM)

    Very straight forward, he won't find it hard to knw d poem is meant for him he may choose to go...., I think he is nt all that happy if you feel he will leave, u should talk to him about it. Its a very nice and important poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ellias Aghili (10/24/2012 4:12:00 PM)

    Well, you have praised this honorable person with your brilliant words and ideas and examples.
    i love the way you wrote this.
    Great one my friend. (Report) Reply

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